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Post by kingkoopa on Jan 24, 2009 16:33:38 GMT -5
This fan-fic as the title implies is what happens inside Bowser's castle when Mario is or is not around. A couple of good fan-fics gave me this idea, JoT, any good ones on Nsider, Ask the Shashers fan-fics, and a couple from TMK. I'll start here with the prolouge.
Prolouge
It was a stormy night, Bowser was thinking up a good way to kidnap Peach, while inside Dungeon Cell #1... Well lets just say that two Koopas are arguing about a broken G&W, but in one of the castle's many hallways almost the entire army is participating in putting up decorations for the next tennis tournament. One Koopa named Bill asks, "Do you think that we will be ready for the next one of Peach's tennis tourneys?" A Boo next to him named Fred replies "Of course we will, next tourney is in 6 months." Just then a lakitu comes in and says, "We got a code red! Everyone assume position!"
To Be Continued...
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Post by thedude3445 on Jan 26, 2009 16:21:22 GMT -5
The plot will probably be interesting, but here's a tip: focus on details such as surroundings, characters' thoughts, ect.
And Dialouge starts a new paragraph btw
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Post by kingkoopa on Jan 28, 2009 19:54:57 GMT -5
Thx for the info cause this is my very first fan-fic. Anyway here is the first chapter. It might be a little too short though
Chapter 1: Luigi?
No one seemed to care that Luigi was coming. As it ends up he jumped into the lava to catch one coin! Luigi wasn't dead but he ran home. Meanwhile in dungeon cell # 1 a strange black substance was entering th room a Koopa yelled,
"Now the people on the second floor are drunk again! Let's go beat um up!"
To be continued...
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Post by shadowgoomba on Jan 31, 2009 18:29:45 GMT -5
It would help to make longer chapters.
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Post by kingkoopa on Feb 1, 2009 20:04:07 GMT -5
I said that one might have been too short. ^Read above. Anyways here is the next chapter...
Chapter 2: Them Drunks
The 2 koopas walked up Castle Koopa's moldy stairs when a coffee pot almost decapitated them
"Man that was close," said one of the Koopas. They entered the tavern and saw 1 of the worst drunken parties ever. Koopas were fighting, Liquid was flying, and everyone was speaking EmO.
"hfhfhjhjjggjghj gjgj gjfkgif." After 2 hours the screaming finally stopped... everyone had been slaughtered. The cleanup crew came after that to clean up the remaining Koopa shells.
Chapter 3:The New Adventure
Bill and Fred were sitting on one of the random thwomp bones lying around when the goomba twins, "Sam and Max"TM joined them.
Sam: Why don't we try to kidnap Peach on our own?
Fred: Nah, instead why don't we go to Lavalava Island and kill some Yoshis.
Everyone agreed on that idea.
And so, the gang set off for Lavalava Island which did not take long to get to at all considering Bowser had several Doomships on the flight deck for invasion missions. As the gang climbed aboard the Doomship more of Bowser's army joined for happiness of invasion. When the Doomship finally arrived the gang set out on their own in one direction while the cavalry set out in the other direction. It ends up that the gang was headed towards Lavalava Mountain while the cavalry was headed for the woods near the Yoshi village. At a certain point there were problems.
Bill: There is a ditch here too big to cross.
Max: How about we blow up a path through those trees.
Sam: That is a good idea but we don't have any dynamite.
Fred: Says who! I always carry some spare dynamite.
They blew up a path in the bushes and the continued. Only a giant temple lay in between them and Lavalava Mountain. Will the conquer Lavalava Mountain or die trying find out on the next episode...
To be continued...
This is a little longer than my last entries so I hope you like it
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Post by shadowgoomba on Feb 7, 2009 15:42:14 GMT -5
It could still be longer. Not Sure what EmO is either.
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Post by kingkoopa on Feb 14, 2009 13:25:04 GMT -5
Oh that is actually emo it is just what you call wierd people I turned it into a language for no apparent reason and yes I will try to make chapters longer
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Post by shadowgoomba on Feb 14, 2009 18:25:42 GMT -5
Emo=/=weird.
Emo is extreme goth.
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Post by kingkoopa on Feb 16, 2009 21:07:24 GMT -5
Sorry, wierd is just how I use emo but that is just because I never looked up the word.
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Post by shadowgoomba on Feb 20, 2009 14:35:14 GMT -5
Well, stop it, because it means something completely different.
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Post by kingkoopa on Feb 21, 2009 9:59:05 GMT -5
Alright (I wasn't really planning on using it again anyway)
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