The Death of the Mario Bros.

[iYoshi]

Wait First, before someone reads the title and says Aww man, iYoshi is whacked out, the Mario Bros. don't actually die. Here's a mysterious summary:
Bowser's victory.
Reformed Yoshi criminals and Yoshis wanting to be heroes.
Cryonics.
Bowser ruling.
Yoshi clan fighting.
New superstars.
Back to normal.

[thedude3445]

Well... You probably have to make the first chapter before you post the topic....T.l

[magikoopa189]

Wait, they DON'T DIE. Oh geez, just another little kid boring story. (Man, I really need to update my story. This place is getting cheezy) Look, seriously. If you wanna break THE WALL, you have to kill someone serious, and NOT Bowser! If it's just another Mario wins story, then everyone will just say They could play a real Mario game, it'd have the same ending. Maybe I'll just rome around and critique people.

[shadowgoomba]

It's possible to write a good story without murder and rape and pillaging. Just because that's your writing style doesn't mean it'll be bad. Tragedies are about build up to a deep ending. Comedies are about how the character gets to said ending, not about the ending itself. It's like comparing apples and oranges.

[magikoopa189]

That is the true, but the problem is that the title is misleading. Anyone who's in the mood for a sadistic Mario story will see "The Death of the Mario Bros.", and happily click on the title. Then the topic creator reveals he was lying (Why did he even call it "The Death of the Mario Bros.", if they don't die? And if it's trying to be a plot twist, why did he spoil it before he even began the story?).

[thedude3445]

IDK, but you just described what I did clicking on his post. xDDD

[Clive Koopa]

Where is the fic? Isn't there supposed to be a fic on this thread?