Post by L.D. on Dec 8, 2005 19:40:10 GMT -5
yay for long titles
I started this at YC,about a yoshi boy who has to defeat the light and shadows of the world by finding: the neon eggs,the pendalum of time,the 5 force stones,and destroy the seven light houses.
kind of original,I'm the first guy to use light as an enemy
I use concepts and characters from many favorite stuff and the element thing is involved,but I like it.
any way:
intro
Once there were 7 god yoshi's,these yoshi's lade the legendary neon eggs,these eggs are more special then the avarege yoshi egg. when they laid them this year however,there was a dark cloud,the eggs scattered to dark,dangerous places: jokes end,mimics tower,dark tower,sirens castle,dopples mansion,treepie village,malo space(dream),and rapter island. another part of the curse turned the eggs holders and the yoshi baby into monsters. So this is where our story starts,in the middle of a small town called triton village.
prologue
"what is happening over there", said Yoshiru,"It appers one of Yokazukas cats have run loose(>_<),nothing the Mario bros. can't handle". He started to go back to sleep when......."Thief get back here". "Yahh",Yoshiru said getting up". Yoshiru jumped off his little house. "So your the trouble maker around here",he shouted. "Oh yeah whats a yoshi kid gonna do" the thief replyed."This" *smack* the thief was smashed across the ground by yoshiru's hammer. The cops showed up later and took the guy to jail,but yoshiru saw something funny,two girlish looking monsters. "sirens", was Yoshiru's first thought. As Yoshiru turned the corner into the ally way he saw the to women,and as he thought they were sirens. "hey you",yoshiru called. "we shall not be called hey you,we shall be called kora..." the other one finished "....and kira". "I'm yoshiru and what are you doing in this town"." they replied "ooo the boy wants to know..." ".....we are here on bowlettas orders to find these neon eggs,they special powers not ment for the weak minded" "wait bowletta was destroyed by mario and luigi",said yoshiru. "the king of the elements rainbow dragon brought her back",said kora. "She is a little bony now but she is back to power",followed kira. "tell bowletta this" WHAM in a matter of 3.4 seconds kora was slammed into the wall. "why you little....." in an instant what was two girls was now to half bird-half human mosters. "kora,kira. we have found the first neon egg get out of there and head to jokes end imidietly" said a mysterious voice. the two sirens left. "jokes end ehh",said yoshiru. " i wonder what would happen if I beat them to it" yoshiru ran tword the bridge to the fields and started his adventure in the yoshi kingdom
Chapter 1: a neon egg on ice
yoshi kingdom fields
"So the first egg is at jokes end eh",yoshiru pondered. "Well I better hitch a ride because the west coast is far off". "Hey little boy",said a mysterious voice,"are you looking for the neon eggs". "yeah",answered yoshiru. "perhaps i can lend you a ride to jokes end". "how did you know",replied yoshiru. "a little fairy told me,and here she is" "hello,my name is natalie",said the fairy. "i know every thing about the gaurdians of the eggs",she said. "oh really",said Yoshiru sarcasticly. "don't question the fairy man",said the guy. so Yoshiru,the guy,and natile rode to the western coast. "by the way,the names blargg,garry blargg,however every one calls me gargantan blargg",said the guy. Yoshiru then saw he had a red face,large sharpp teeth and angryish eyebrows. "So your from yoshi's island",questioned Yoshiru. "yep,and Natile is from the kokiri forest",Garry said. "It's getting colder",complained yoshiru. "thats becasue you are heading into a cold place",answered Natile. they rode through a cold area where ice based monsters attacked,Garry and yoshiru fought them while Natile gave advice. Thanks to garry's fire elemental magic,they were victorious. Eventually they made it to the frozen fortess. Yoshiru trekked in alone becasue it got to cold for Natlie and Garry didn't want to let her get killed,for then he would have knowledge about the land. "Garry said that the gardian of this place's friend,Jojora could help,but where is she," questioned yoshiru. Yoshiru had a tougher time betting the enemies but he learned two spells: fire and aero. Around the third floor he saw a floating girl fly past running away from some ice ahmirens,which he charred right away. "Hey,Jojora....." "what,and how do you know my name",she snaped. "A guy named Garry told me,yoshiru answered,"Anyways,do you know where the neon egg is"? "yes I do,but you won't get there with out my help",she answered. they fought through ice ahmiren,snow hounds,freeze dragons,swablu's,and Cackles before reaching the egg. To bad there was surprise waiting for them.
to be continued.....chapter 2: frosty fight
I started this at YC,about a yoshi boy who has to defeat the light and shadows of the world by finding: the neon eggs,the pendalum of time,the 5 force stones,and destroy the seven light houses.
kind of original,I'm the first guy to use light as an enemy
I use concepts and characters from many favorite stuff and the element thing is involved,but I like it.
any way:
intro
Once there were 7 god yoshi's,these yoshi's lade the legendary neon eggs,these eggs are more special then the avarege yoshi egg. when they laid them this year however,there was a dark cloud,the eggs scattered to dark,dangerous places: jokes end,mimics tower,dark tower,sirens castle,dopples mansion,treepie village,malo space(dream),and rapter island. another part of the curse turned the eggs holders and the yoshi baby into monsters. So this is where our story starts,in the middle of a small town called triton village.
prologue
"what is happening over there", said Yoshiru,"It appers one of Yokazukas cats have run loose(>_<),nothing the Mario bros. can't handle". He started to go back to sleep when......."Thief get back here". "Yahh",Yoshiru said getting up". Yoshiru jumped off his little house. "So your the trouble maker around here",he shouted. "Oh yeah whats a yoshi kid gonna do" the thief replyed."This" *smack* the thief was smashed across the ground by yoshiru's hammer. The cops showed up later and took the guy to jail,but yoshiru saw something funny,two girlish looking monsters. "sirens", was Yoshiru's first thought. As Yoshiru turned the corner into the ally way he saw the to women,and as he thought they were sirens. "hey you",yoshiru called. "we shall not be called hey you,we shall be called kora..." the other one finished "....and kira". "I'm yoshiru and what are you doing in this town"." they replied "ooo the boy wants to know..." ".....we are here on bowlettas orders to find these neon eggs,they special powers not ment for the weak minded" "wait bowletta was destroyed by mario and luigi",said yoshiru. "the king of the elements rainbow dragon brought her back",said kora. "She is a little bony now but she is back to power",followed kira. "tell bowletta this" WHAM in a matter of 3.4 seconds kora was slammed into the wall. "why you little....." in an instant what was two girls was now to half bird-half human mosters. "kora,kira. we have found the first neon egg get out of there and head to jokes end imidietly" said a mysterious voice. the two sirens left. "jokes end ehh",said yoshiru. " i wonder what would happen if I beat them to it" yoshiru ran tword the bridge to the fields and started his adventure in the yoshi kingdom
Chapter 1: a neon egg on ice
yoshi kingdom fields
"So the first egg is at jokes end eh",yoshiru pondered. "Well I better hitch a ride because the west coast is far off". "Hey little boy",said a mysterious voice,"are you looking for the neon eggs". "yeah",answered yoshiru. "perhaps i can lend you a ride to jokes end". "how did you know",replied yoshiru. "a little fairy told me,and here she is" "hello,my name is natalie",said the fairy. "i know every thing about the gaurdians of the eggs",she said. "oh really",said Yoshiru sarcasticly. "don't question the fairy man",said the guy. so Yoshiru,the guy,and natile rode to the western coast. "by the way,the names blargg,garry blargg,however every one calls me gargantan blargg",said the guy. Yoshiru then saw he had a red face,large sharpp teeth and angryish eyebrows. "So your from yoshi's island",questioned Yoshiru. "yep,and Natile is from the kokiri forest",Garry said. "It's getting colder",complained yoshiru. "thats becasue you are heading into a cold place",answered Natile. they rode through a cold area where ice based monsters attacked,Garry and yoshiru fought them while Natile gave advice. Thanks to garry's fire elemental magic,they were victorious. Eventually they made it to the frozen fortess. Yoshiru trekked in alone becasue it got to cold for Natlie and Garry didn't want to let her get killed,for then he would have knowledge about the land. "Garry said that the gardian of this place's friend,Jojora could help,but where is she," questioned yoshiru. Yoshiru had a tougher time betting the enemies but he learned two spells: fire and aero. Around the third floor he saw a floating girl fly past running away from some ice ahmirens,which he charred right away. "Hey,Jojora....." "what,and how do you know my name",she snaped. "A guy named Garry told me,yoshiru answered,"Anyways,do you know where the neon egg is"? "yes I do,but you won't get there with out my help",she answered. they fought through ice ahmiren,snow hounds,freeze dragons,swablu's,and Cackles before reaching the egg. To bad there was surprise waiting for them.
to be continued.....chapter 2: frosty fight
